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The mind & the heart

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Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa


0 posted 09-13-99 12:11 AM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Richard 33

She is obscured from my view,yet I can see
her.
To me she is mute, but I can hear her.
She is not in my presense, although I can
feel her near me.
Messages in typed letters, she has krept into
my life,she has found my spirit. She has become entwined into my life.
such inspiration that abounds from her.
Inspires me with every breath I take.
My soul, having been touched like never
before.
Her source is endless, as she leaves me
hungering for more.
My sweetast one, I look up to the sky filled
with stars, and wish you were here to hold.
Then I realize you are, and I am holding
you in my heart.

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 09-13-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-13-99 12:37 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

...Ahhhhhh, Richard this is absolutely breathtaking! What is it about romantic poetry that I love? Very well done!

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Denise
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since 07-05-99
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Richard...indeed a beautiful piece

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin
Richard 33
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3 posted 09-13-99 11:48 AM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Thanks it was written for someone special.
There is nothing like true feelings of the
heart for inspiration!
Richard 33
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since 09-09-99
Posts 197
glen easton, wv usa


4 posted 09-13-99 02:07 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

I am not tuting my own horn. It's special.
You just gotta read this.
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
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5 posted 09-13-99 08:03 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Very very beautiful poem, Richard...you certainly poured you heart & soul into this one...fabulous work! Thank you so much for sharing this.....***blowing kisses

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


 
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