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Open Poetry #2

The mind & the heart

Richard 33
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

0 posted 1999-09-13 12:11 PM

She is obscured from my view,yet I can see
her.
To me she is mute, but I can hear her.
She is not in my presense, although I can
feel her near me.
Messages in typed letters, she has krept into
my life,she has found my spirit. She has become entwined into my life.
such inspiration that abounds from her.
Inspires me with every breath I take.
My soul, having been touched like never
before.
Her source is endless, as she leaves me
hungering for more.
My sweetast one, I look up to the sky filled
with stars, and wish you were here to hold.
Then I realize you are, and I am holding
you in my heart.

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 09-13-99).]

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-13 12:37 PM

...Ahhhhhh, Richard this is absolutely breathtaking! What is it about romantic poetry that I love? Very well done!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-13 08:24 AM

Richard...indeed a beautiful piece

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

Richard 33
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

3 posted 1999-09-13 11:48 AM

Thanks it was written for someone special.
There is nothing like true feelings of the
heart for inspiration!

Richard 33
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

4 posted 1999-09-13 02:07 PM

I am not tuting my own horn. It's special.
You just gotta read this.

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

5 posted 1999-09-13 08:03 PM

Very very beautiful poem, Richard...you certainly poured you heart & soul into this one...fabulous work! Thank you so much for sharing this.....***blowing kisses

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

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