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Loneliness

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Poet deVine
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Traffic sounds, a whisper in the trees
I realize that these
are sounds of my loneliness

tears crashing upon my hands
heart tightened with restricting bands
signs of my loneliness

a soft sigh sounds so loud
in the middle of a noisy crowd
need feeds my loneliness

wondering in my mind
if love is truly blind
distance increases my loneliness

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Denise
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1 posted 09-12-99 11:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done! If someone did not know what loneliness was, they certainly would after reading this! FABULOUS!!!

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WhtDove
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This was sad. Tears crashing upon my hands, I loved that line. Very well done!!!!!!!
DreamEvil
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3 posted 09-13-99 02:47 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Heart-rending verse, Lady deVine. I feel for you.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
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4 posted 09-13-99 06:13 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Some say we always are alone.
Some say we never are.
Philosophers and Christians may,
At times, have thoughts quite far.

It's true we always are alone
At least, deep down inside.
It's true we never are alone
For that's why Jesus died.

But one can take opinions all
And stack them on the shelf.
Philosophy means little when
You wake up by yourself.


If admiration means anything, deVine one, you will never be alone.
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 09-13-99 08:31 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very sad poet...a touching piece

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin
Iloveit
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6 posted 09-13-99 10:44 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

beautiful, your description was so perfect,
the busy world, going on all around, but still...you feel alone.....
have a hug poet...you write for me too!
DBeth
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7 posted 09-13-99 10:48 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Wondering in my mind
If love is truly blind.
Excellent poem! I love your work!

DBeth

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JennyLee
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8 posted 09-13-99 05:16 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Wondering in my mind if love is truly blind.
I love your work!!
Thanks so much for sharing your talent!!!

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