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Sundance
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0 posted 09-12-99 09:37 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance

I yearn to be with you,
do you even know?
How much I love you,
I can't let you go.

I follow you everywhere,
you go along without a care,
but you don't know I love you,
It is so not fair!

I continue to love you,
but you break the yearn,
I wish you wouldn't,
when will you learn?

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1 posted 09-12-99 09:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I know just how this feels, Sundance. Sometimes people just cannot take a hint. If this is about your life, then good luck.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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2 posted 09-12-99 09:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I remember those days and I'm glad they're just a memory! Nice poem!

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3 posted 09-13-99 08:22 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Thanks u guys!

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4 posted 09-13-99 08:34 PM       View Profile for Emmy   Email Emmy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Emmy's Home Page   View IP for Emmy

I can't help but wonder if this was written about anyone in particular... Was it? Whatever your answer... this was good. I liked the title too. Alas for all of us who feel the feelings expressed in this poem...
Sundance
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5 posted 09-13-99 08:35 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Phil of course!


Sundance
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6 posted 09-14-99 09:07 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

anyone else?


Isis
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7 posted 09-14-99 09:25 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Alas, the pain when they are too blind or too dumb to see.
Well done..

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~Isis~


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8 posted 09-14-99 09:28 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

thanks a bunch!

 
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