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Sundance
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0 posted 09-12-99 09:34 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance

I gaze at you endlessly,
then you turn your head and catch me.
I look up again,
wanting to see you,
but you start blushing,
because you were gazing at me.

I remember the first day I met you.
you were in blue and green.
Smiling at me,
me smiling at you.
We took hands,
and walked and talked the night away.

Someday maybe,
we'll be more than friends,
but for right now I still love you,
anyway we are!

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1 posted 09-12-99 09:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is precious, Sundance! I enjoyed this!

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2 posted 09-12-99 09:56 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Me too!

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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3 posted 09-13-99 08:26 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Thanks so much u guys!

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I could really see this all as it happened. I like the last line especially. Good luck to you and your "mystery man" here... may the next time you blush be because you snuck a kiss!!!
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5 posted 09-13-99 08:45 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Thanks!

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6 posted 09-14-99 08:59 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Anyone else?

 
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