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Open Poetry #2

Gaze

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

0 posted 1999-09-12 09:34 PM

I gaze at you endlessly,
then you turn your head and catch me.
I look up again,
wanting to see you,
but you start blushing,
because you were gazing at me.

I remember the first day I met you.
you were in blue and green.
Smiling at me,
me smiling at you.
We took hands,
and walked and talked the night away.

Someday maybe,
we'll be more than friends,
but for right now I still love you,
anyway we are!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-12 09:55 PM

This is precious, Sundance! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 1999-09-12 09:56 PM

Me too!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

3 posted 1999-09-13 08:26 PM

Thanks so much u guys!

Emmy
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

4 posted 1999-09-13 08:40 PM

I could really see this all as it happened. I like the last line especially. Good luck to you and your "mystery man" here... may the next time you blush be because you snuck a kiss!!!

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

5 posted 1999-09-13 08:45 PM

Thanks!

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

6 posted 1999-09-14 08:59 PM

Anyone else?

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