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*** I touch my screen ***

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 09-12-99 06:56 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I'm logging on - I hold my breath
to see if you are there...
to see if you have left for me
a treasure anywhere...
An e-mail, or a poem or
a paragraph of love -
my lover on the Internet
sent to me - from above.
My monitor, a window to
the world in which you live -
my heart an open vessel that
is full & wants to give...
To you - my love - true happiness,
a feeling so complete -
I've needed you, you've needed me
however did we meet ?...
I place my hand upon the screen
and wish that I could feel
your lips, your breath, your soft caress
I know that you are real.
I try to fight this feeling that
you are just fantasy - -
I've never had someone like you
please give your "words" to me.
Romantic verse with meter - rhyme,
make love to me with prose...
lull me into lover's sleep -
Will I awake ? Who knows....
Please feel me reaching out to you
my hand upon the screen -
I long to touch you - hold you close
and "feel" you in my dream.
I think of you as someone who
completes me through & through...
from this day forth, with Cyber-love
I give my "words" to you..........


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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-12-99 07:12 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I see that you can indeed "relate". Your words are well-written, chosen and spoken.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvilŠ


caroline
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2 posted 09-12-99 07:18 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

PFF...your excellence is showing
This is really an outstanding poem.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 09-12-99 07:19 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely written Poet.......amazing how many relationships are formed online.

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin
Denise
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4 posted 09-12-99 07:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another great one!

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Denise
Poet deVine
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5 posted 09-12-99 07:57 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful! He's lucky to have such a talented, warm, loving woman!
Lucie
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6 posted 09-12-99 08:11 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Excellent Femme, this is well written and thought out. It flows beautifully!
Saxoness
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7 posted 09-12-99 08:12 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Very nice indeed! Bravo, makes me think of my little romance online...my sentiments exactly!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Balladeer
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8 posted 09-12-99 08:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is good. I mean really good. I think that many of have the urge to put our hands on the screen in a effort to be closer to the person we are communicating with. Wonderful thoughts.
Pepper
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9 posted 09-12-99 09:09 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

dreamy...wonderfully written Pff...can identify with this.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 09-12-99 09:54 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

PoetFemmeFatale,
I agree with
balladeer this is a really good one. One of your best.
Richard 33
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11 posted 09-12-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Wow what a poem! I'm speechless.
I loved it!!!!!!!!
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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12 posted 09-12-99 10:59 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

ENCORE!!!! This was EXCELLENT pFF!!!!!
poetFemmeFatale
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13 posted 09-13-99 09:21 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thank you everyone - I'm glad to see you accepted this with open arms...I have met so many truly wonderful people in this forum, but one in particular has stolen my heart, for I am weak.... Thank you all again !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


JennyLee
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since 09-01-99
Posts 1478
Northwestern, NJ.


14 posted 09-13-99 09:43 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Bravo !! So beautifully written !!!
Who hasn't exactly felt this way....
MORE Poet !!!

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Helewes
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15 posted 09-13-99 09:49 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Poet: Exquisite!

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


16 posted 09-13-99 11:16 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

How well you've captured that breathless anticipation of logging on... looking and hoping for a word that will make your day! I must admit, I'm guilty of touching my screen... wishing I could reach beyond it... Excellent job!!
Iloveit
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17 posted 09-13-99 11:32 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

hey I am not feeling very wordy today, but this poem is perfect....so will just tag onto suthern's post and say ditto!!

no really great portrayal of something so many of us live every day!
JTF
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18 posted 09-13-99 11:37 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

PFF : Superb and so true ...

Lovey : you're not feeling very "hairy" today ? ... errr, wordy ... ooops, better run and duck ... LOL
Iloveit
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19 posted 09-13-99 12:24 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep, wordy/hairy....neither affects my aim, well that is unless my hair gets in my eyes and then I might hit something I wasn't aiming for *eg* so good think you ducked lol....
~one voice~
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Posts 668
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20 posted 09-13-99 04:03 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

PFF... What can I say that hasn't already been said? This piece is outstanding and so beautifully worded! I love it!!!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

poetFemmeFatale
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21 posted 09-14-99 12:19 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

What can I say? I am so humbled by all of your responses! So many of you are new poets to the forum, I've got many new names to learn! Whew! Talk about having your work cut out for you....I'd better get busy....! I knew many of you could relate to this sort of poem....we've all felt this way at one time or another. ****blowing many kisses!! Thanks again to each & every one of you !!!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Isis
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22 posted 09-14-99 12:51 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautifully written and flowing...:
Good luck with your cyber love...:::

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Dean's Girl
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since 09-14-99
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Weedsport,NY,USA


23 posted 09-14-99 07:27 AM       View Profile for Dean's Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dean's Girl

Wow, just as I feel, and just as I spoke to Dean last evening. I touch my screen and can actually feel you!

What a powerful feeling indeed.
beowulf_26
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24 posted 09-14-99 02:42 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

I was searching through the piles here at Passions for another piece by you and found this little gem. I sat there in awe just admiring the work. The words just flowed wonderfully. My hat is off to you.

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