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Memories of You

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Mike
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0 posted 09-12-99 06:48 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

Once upon a memory,
...was captured by your charms,
Eidetically envision,
...your beauty in my arms,
My eyes drink of your loveliness,
...the grace of supple limb,
Sweet creature from the welkin blue,
...angelic seraphim,
As petals of the satin rose,
...I smell your fragrant scent,
Caress the smoothness of your skin,
...my goddess heaven sent,
I whisper softly as we part,
...I'll love you evermore,
Keep me in your heart forever,
...my humble plea implore,
I kiss you gently on the lips,
...gaze into your eyes,
Once upon a memory,
...I touched upon the skies.
© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Sue
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1 posted 09-12-99 06:49 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

"Once upon a memory" - lovely.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 09-12-99 07:05 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wonderful! No other words left...
Pepper
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3 posted 09-12-99 07:07 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Mike, this is beautiful and very well written....I am saving this in my favorite files

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
caroline
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4 posted 09-12-99 07:09 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

a most romantic piece...I thoroughly enjoyed reading this

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Denise
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5 posted 09-12-99 07:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Poetry at its finest - I'll say it again!
Very well done!

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Denise
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Wow...this is esqusite. The rhythm and rhyme are very good. Thanks for posting

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin
Mike
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7 posted 09-12-99 11:23 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Thank you for your gracious comments.
Justbleu
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8 posted 09-16-99 07:32 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Quite wonderful indeed!!! So pretty!!

Thank You1!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

MissQ
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9 posted 09-16-99 11:14 AM       View Profile for MissQ   Email MissQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MissQ

"Sweet dreature from the welken blue"....I love that line....beautiful words you have
Nan
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10 posted 09-16-99 06:33 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Geesh, Mike - You're just too darned good...
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beautiful
 
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