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jenni
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0 posted 1999-09-12 06:45 PM


Craig's posting ("Bad Poetry Warning," which i didn't think was bad at all!) inspired me to share with everyone something i wrote a few months ago, one night just before closing time... :

O Wine Glass clear and tall and strong,
You taunt me on your stem so long.
I'd leave you if my wit were quicker --
If I, like you, could hold my liquor.

j.p.

© Copyright 1999 jenni - All Rights Reserved
Sue
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1 posted 1999-09-12 06:48 PM


Love it!
Pepper
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2 posted 1999-09-12 06:50 PM


very cute

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Denise
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3 posted 1999-09-12 08:04 PM


Very funny!!!

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Denise

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4 posted 2001-07-10 11:19 PM


I'd leave you if my wit were quicker --
If I, like you, could hold my liquor.


indeed, indeed!
If only I could too.

Excellent Jenni

Maree  

"little miss understood
little misunderstood"

~Marry me Jane~


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5 posted 2001-12-11 04:36 AM


Delightfully done!  

I am many.

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6 posted 2002-02-13 03:23 PM


oohhh I love it! Cheers!
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7 posted 2002-05-01 08:32 PM


I tip my glass to ye.
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8 posted 2003-01-01 04:04 AM


hehehe, like it!
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