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Alone

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Tisha
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since 09-11-99
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Weedsport, NY


0 posted 09-12-99 07:15 AM       View Profile for Tisha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tisha

ALONE

After all is gone
After the voices end
I sit alone

After loving words come
After loving words go
I sit alone

This life should have been a good one
This life should have made me smile
I am alone

As the sunshines try to beam into the puddles in my life
And the breese gently carress my skin
I am alone

A glimmer of sunshine
A glimmer of hope
A time spent in laughter, to cherish at most
Yet still, I am alone

Alone is my destiny
Alone is my hope
Alone is the feeling restless
consuming
still
an ending
I sit alone

© Copyright 1999 Tisha - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 09-12-99 10:40 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very sad

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin
Denise
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2 posted 09-12-99 02:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice Tisha and very true, for when all is said and done, are we not all in some way alone with ourselves? I liked this one alot!


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Denise
BoyToy
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since 09-12-99
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everett, wa, usa


3 posted 09-12-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for BoyToy   Email BoyToy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BoyToy

Tisha,
You are a very talented and special person. Someday your Prince Chraming will arrive and sweep you off your feet, then you will never have to feel alone again. I feel that this will happen for you sometime before the end of November.
Good Luck
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
Posts 3430
Oregon, Originally From Alaska


4 posted 09-16-99 07:42 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This was sad...but I liked it!!
The more I read the more I hope people realize how similar we as people really are!! I do not think there is anyone in this life who at one time or another has not felt what you have portrayed here!! Thank You for the reminder!!! Well done!!



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