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Tisha
Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 12
Weedsport, NY

0 posted 1999-09-12 07:15 AM


ALONE

After all is gone
After the voices end
I sit alone

After loving words come
After loving words go
I sit alone

This life should have been a good one
This life should have made me smile
I am alone

As the sunshines try to beam into the puddles in my life
And the breese gently carress my skin
I am alone

A glimmer of sunshine
A glimmer of hope
A time spent in laughter, to cherish at most
Yet still, I am alone

Alone is my destiny
Alone is my hope
Alone is the feeling restless
consuming
still
an ending
I sit alone


© Copyright 1999 Tisha - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-12 10:40 AM


Very sad

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-12 02:11 PM


Very nice Tisha and very true, for when all is said and done, are we not all in some way alone with ourselves? I liked this one alot!


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Denise

BoyToy
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
everett, wa, usa
3 posted 1999-09-12 11:14 PM


Tisha,
You are a very talented and special person. Someday your Prince Chraming will arrive and sweep you off your feet, then you will never have to feel alone again. I feel that this will happen for you sometime before the end of November.
Good Luck

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 1999-09-16 07:42 AM


This was sad...but I liked it!!
The more I read the more I hope people realize how similar we as people really are!! I do not think there is anyone in this life who at one time or another has not felt what you have portrayed here!! Thank You for the reminder!!! Well done!!



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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


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