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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston

0 posted 1999-09-11 10:24 PM


Cover your eyes and count to ten
as this game of Toe tag begins again.
the rules are easy you can not lose
its so much fun you can’t refuse.

You take some words add Toerags name
then take Longjohn’s and do the same.
The simple jokes that all come out
are what this game is all about.

Poems, never cruel or really mean
a camaraderie you’ve rarely seen.
Friendships that we take to heart,
remember this before you start.

Cause believe me they retaliate
once you start its much to late.
Tag your Toe run out the door
cause you’ve just joined the tag team war.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
1 posted 1999-09-11 10:29 PM


LOL...It's fun to read what you all come up with!
Lucie
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Houston
2 posted 1999-09-12 08:32 PM


I'm joining forces with Balladeer, he's been picked on enough..heheh!
Saxoness
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3 posted 1999-09-12 08:38 PM


lol, good one

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Elizabeth
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4 posted 1999-09-12 09:32 PM




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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
5 posted 1999-09-13 12:46 PM


I agree Lucie, he has been picked on quite a bit. Oh no, I am not stepping into this one. I prefer to sit in the back and laugh!
Toerag
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Ala bam a
6 posted 1999-09-13 07:01 AM


You're joining forces with Balladeer?....But, but, I've written such sweet things to you?.....And I'm better looking? And I never just get even.....I ALWAYS GET AHEAD!!! LOL....Well done gal...no matter whose side you're on....
suthern
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Louisiana
7 posted 1999-09-13 07:04 AM


Lucie: You may want to re-consider... *G* When you're doing all that collaborating, ya definitely need to be working with the better looking one! LOL. But that's okay (ya lil traitor *G*)... I have every confidence in Toe managing quite well... even if y'all do gang up on him! LOL Great job!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-09-13 09:10 AM


Cute

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson

Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston
9 posted 1999-09-13 09:42 AM


Hey, there are benefits to working with Balladeer. Winter's coming and I need all that wool for a new scarf. hahaha
LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
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10 posted 1999-09-13 02:46 PM


Lucie - tis a nice poem ye writ, lil Lassie - tis a shame ye slipped up and mentioned me name - now ye'll ne'er see the bonnie shores of Scotland agayn... arrgghhhh
Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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Redlands,CA,USA
11 posted 1999-09-13 03:56 PM


Lady Lucie: I'm glad you have the courage to step into the fray. I suppose if I were to choose sides, (not sayin' I am!) I'd have to choose the high ground and go with Sir Balladeer as well. To me Toe's like a sawed-off shotgun that just keeps on pumping out lead in a wide area looking for a hit, a rather successful approach given the plethora of ammo at his disposal. Balladeer on the other hand is akin to a finely calibrated sniper's rifle. With precision and skill he seeks his target and then BANG! Tagem' and bagem'. One shot, one kill. To step into that mix takes guts. I just don't think my pens up to the slaughter. In comparison I think I'd be walking around with a sling-shot and no pebbles. Glory to you! Enjoyed your offering here

Toerag
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Ala bam a
12 posted 1999-09-13 04:08 PM


Andy.....yanno?....You're probably right! But remember....True...Balladeer has a ton of ammo...and he's got all the class, the weaponry, the knowledge, and a whole lot of well skilled planning...but remember...so did the U.S. in Vietnam....and look at what happened?....I will persist....maybe never win...but then again....I will take a toll somewhere down the line...LOL...and win or lose....it is indeed fun....besides..when Lucie just wants companionship...she'll side with Balladeer...when she wants orgasmic bliss, she'll come to Toerag at least now and then...LOL
Andrew Scott
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Redlands,CA,USA
13 posted 1999-09-13 06:23 PM


Toe: True enough about Nam, but I think we were more or less beat by politics (I wasn't there so take that as you will). Within this jungle of words I don't see getting much help from that corner and unless you start wearing black pajamas I don't think you're going to blend in with the rest of the pack. Face it, you're just to visible a target with that day-glow Hawaiian shirt. As for keeping the ladies happy... well you know what they say about men and their big guns... someting about compenstation. That's why I carry a sling shot. Happy Hunting!
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
14 posted 1999-09-16 07:29 AM


I'm just sitting back enjoying all of this...keep it up...I couldn't live without such great entertainment Toe and Deer!!! Let the games go on......

You have great courage there Lucie!!!
Keep on shooting!! hehe



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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


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