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In A Romantic Mood Tonight1
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In A Romantic Mood Tonight1 |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Long distance love is a difficult choice. Surging emotions I don't understand. This chorus of feeling speaks with one voice. True love fills me with an awesome power. Our souls became one in cyber-space. We're blessed in this electronic bower. Eyes closed,my fingers ache to touch her face. Her silence speaks to me, not just her words. Her sparkling eyes are dancing in my mind. Our love takes flight on the wings of birds. She's the treasure I never thought to find. From heartache and her love springs sweet release. With rage and my past she has made my peace. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I love it when you are in a romantic mood  You write so beautifully. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow , Dream, this is great, I love it well written ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Always a pleasure to see this side of you, Dream. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done Dream...I don't believe I was so far off was I?? ------------------ "The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
'Tis good to see this side! Romance away! Great Poem! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
As a hopeless romantic, I certainly enjoy this side of you, Dream. And this is truly beautiful. Exellent work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You are quite the romantic! Loved it! ------------------ Denise |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Distance is always such a factor on the computer, not always in love, but in friendships as well. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh Dream, what can I say that everyone hasn't already said??? Your dark side is dark, but I have to admit, your love runs deeper than most I've seen.....absolutely exquisite poem....very very beautifully written....and I sure can relate to the story you tell here.....*** blowing kisses ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good. In distance, we are closer I think..... I enjoy the differences in your poetry lately. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
As usual, Dream, you have written something totally beautiful! Thank you very much! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I read this again and realize the truth hiding within it's lines....I see you've fallen in love with a fair maiden online! I think it's nice when we can broaden our horizons with friendships/relationships online....even if we can't act on them....sometimes it's our only escape to sanity.....what a lucky girl! The first stanza says it all..........I can relate. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
The moment has passed, though perhaps it will come again. I have come to hold many at Passions near and dear to my heart, some more than others and that is the true reward of PiP, not the exhibition of one's verse, but rather the relationships and friendships that form out of this community we have created here. My rare romantic moods therefore are due to all the poets at PiP, though again, some more than others. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I couldn't have said it better DE! ------------------ Denise |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
What a romantic man you are! [This message has been edited by Cinderella (edited 09-13-99).] |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Dream, I feel like the biggest ditz in the whole world! I read this when I was so completely tired, so please forgive me as I didn't read between the lines... That first stanza up there certainly says a lot! I couldn't be smiling any wider than I am right now! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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Billy Junior Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 25 |
I loved it but, I kinda feel like I'm eavesdropping. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
There is one voice only that I hear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dream, Can't believe I didn't comment on this one. Well after careful consideration, I'd say It's pretty dam good. |
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