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In A Romantic Mood Tonight1

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-11-99 09:59 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Across the miles, we hold each other's hand.
Long distance love is a difficult choice.
Surging emotions I don't understand.
This chorus of feeling speaks with one voice.

True love fills me with an awesome power.
Our souls became one in cyber-space.
We're blessed in this electronic bower.
Eyes closed,my fingers ache to touch her face.

Her silence speaks to me, not just her words.
Her sparkling eyes are dancing in my mind.
Our love takes flight on the wings of birds.
She's the treasure I never thought to find.

From heartache and her love springs sweet release.
With rage and my past she has made my peace.

©1999 DreamEvil



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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©


© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 09-11-99 10:03 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I love it when you are in a romantic mood
You write so beautifully. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Dark Angel
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2 posted 09-11-99 10:04 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wow , Dream, this is great, I love it well written

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Balladeer
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3 posted 09-11-99 10:10 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Always a pleasure to see this side of you, Dream.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 09-11-99 10:13 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done Dream...I don't believe I was so far off was I??

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin
WhtDove
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5 posted 09-11-99 10:16 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

'Tis good to see this side! Romance away!
Great Poem!
Alwye
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6 posted 09-11-99 10:32 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

As a hopeless romantic, I certainly enjoy this side of you, Dream. And this is truly beautiful. Exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Denise
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7 posted 09-11-99 10:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You are quite the romantic! Loved it!

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Denise
Lucie
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8 posted 09-11-99 10:41 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Distance is always such a factor on the computer, not always in love, but in friendships as well.
poetFemmeFatale
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9 posted 09-11-99 10:54 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh Dream, what can I say that everyone hasn't already said??? Your dark side is dark, but I have to admit, your love runs deeper than most I've seen.....absolutely exquisite poem....very very beautifully written....and I sure can relate to the story you tell here.....*** blowing kisses

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Poet deVine
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10 posted 09-11-99 11:43 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very good. In distance, we are closer I think..... I enjoy the differences in your poetry lately.
~one voice~
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11 posted 09-12-99 03:16 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

As usual, Dream, you have written something totally beautiful! Thank you very much!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

poetFemmeFatale
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12 posted 09-12-99 10:31 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I read this again and realize the truth hiding within it's lines....I see you've fallen in love with a fair maiden online! I think it's nice when we can broaden our horizons with friendships/relationships online....even if we can't act on them....sometimes it's our only escape to sanity.....what a lucky girl! The first stanza says it all..........I can relate.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


DreamEvil
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13 posted 09-12-99 01:59 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

The moment has passed, though perhaps it will come again.

I have come to hold many at Passions near and dear to my heart, some more than others and that is the true reward of PiP, not the exhibition of one's verse, but rather the relationships and friendships that form out of this community we have created here.

My rare romantic moods therefore are due to all the poets at PiP, though again, some more than others.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©


Denise
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14 posted 09-12-99 02:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I couldn't have said it better DE!

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Denise
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15 posted 09-13-99 03:15 AM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderella

What a romantic man you are!

[This message has been edited by Cinderella (edited 09-13-99).]
~one voice~
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16 posted 09-13-99 03:33 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, I feel like the biggest ditz in the whole world! I read this when I was so completely tired, so please forgive me as I didn't read between the lines... That first stanza up there certainly says a lot! I couldn't be smiling any wider than I am right now!


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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

Billy
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17 posted 09-13-99 03:47 AM       View Profile for Billy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Billy

I loved it but, I kinda feel like I'm eavesdropping.
DreamEvil
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18 posted 09-17-99 06:00 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

There is one voice only that I hear.
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 09-17-99 06:12 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dream,
Can't believe I didn't comment on this one.
Well after careful consideration, I'd say
It's pretty dam good.
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