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HCwildchild
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0 posted 09-11-99 09:40 PM       View Profile for HCwildchild   Email HCwildchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HCwildchild

Dark and cold my world once was,
Hopeless,and lonely with no love.
Bitter tears were running down my face,
While thinking of when I would leave this place.
To be far from all these petty things,
So far from all the pain it brings.
Then you came into my life,
And things started to feel alright.
Where there was darkness you shed the light,
Filling my world with golden sunlight,
Warming my heart with a love so true,
Now my only dream is to be with you.


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Heather C.
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1 posted 09-11-99 10:49 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

You hold on to this love girl ! I know life seems to be "happier" when you have someone, but true happiness is within yourself ! You don't have to have someone to be happy.....you just remember that, ok? I really liked this poem - great job!!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


HCwildchild
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2 posted 09-11-99 10:57 PM       View Profile for HCwildchild   Email HCwildchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HCwildchild

Thankyou for your sweet comments That is very good advice, and no worries I'm not suicidal or anything, and I get on great by myself This was just written about a guy who really helped me get my mind off the worse things in life, made me realize that yes, life has its hills and valleys, but is worth the ride

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Heather C.
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3 posted 09-11-99 11:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well said, Heather!

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Denise
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Nicely stated

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin
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Great write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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