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Open Poetry #2

You Shed The Light

HCwildchild
Member

since 1999-09-03

Posts 55
Pennsylvania,USA

0 posted 1999-09-11 09:40 PM

Dark and cold my world once was,
Hopeless,and lonely with no love.
Bitter tears were running down my face,
While thinking of when I would leave this place.
To be far from all these petty things,
So far from all the pain it brings.
Then you came into my life,
And things started to feel alright.
Where there was darkness you shed the light,
Filling my world with golden sunlight,
Warming my heart with a love so true,
Now my only dream is to be with you.

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Heather C.

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-09-11 10:49 PM

You hold on to this love girl ! I know life seems to be "happier" when you have someone, but true happiness is within yourself ! You don't have to have someone to be happy.....you just remember that, ok? I really liked this poem - great job!!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

HCwildchild
Member

since 1999-09-03

Posts 55
Pennsylvania,USA

2 posted 1999-09-11 10:57 PM

Thankyou for your sweet comments

That is very good advice, and no worries I'm not suicidal or anything, and I get on great by myself

This was just written about a guy who really helped me get my mind off the worse things in life, made me realize that yes, life has its hills and valleys, but is worth the ride

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Heather C.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-09-11 11:26 PM

Well said, Heather!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-09-12 10:57 AM

Nicely stated

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-12-24 11:23 AM

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-12-24 07:14 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

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