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Dark Angel
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0 posted 09-11-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Your Existence

You were my Love
Your Love made me high
It kept me young
And made me wanna fly
Over the great Oceans and Seas
To come and get you

I believed in Love
And in Dreams
Now your Love has died
And mine is dying
God, How we tried
To keep it going

Oh! How I soared over Mountains
And layed upon a Cloud
I found wonderful You
I was so proud
To have you in my life
And maybe one day
As my Wife

Never did I hear or feel you breathe
To really know…….
Your existence



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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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HCwildchild
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1 posted 09-11-99 09:45 PM       View Profile for HCwildchild   Email HCwildchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HCwildchild

I thought this was very well done, keep up the good work.

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Heather C.
WhtDove
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2 posted 09-11-99 09:54 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Very well done D.A. It's sad...but loves always are. Very nice!
caroline
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3 posted 09-11-99 09:57 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Poignant piece, Dark...I can relate well to this. I especially love the last stanza.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Dark Angel
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4 posted 09-11-99 10:08 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

HCwildchild, WhtDove and Caroline thank you for your lovely comments

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Justbleu
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5 posted 09-15-99 02:24 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

That was lovely!!! Yet seemingly sad!!
I liked it very much!!

Thanks again!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Dark Angel
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6 posted 09-15-99 02:49 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you Justbleu

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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