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HCwildchild
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0 posted 1999-09-11 09:24 PM


Gradually dusk falls upon the land,
Engulfing the world in darkness.
No longer can you see the sun,
The midnight hour is upon us.
A cold wind sweeps down through the streets,
Whilst I lie awake in bed,
And I must pull tight the sheets,
And rest my weary head.
Then I slowly close my eyes,
And dream of you and me.
The stars soon cover the night sky,
They are the only light you can see.
And I am safe and warm inside,
When I'm dreaming of the things that could be.
Where there is nothing we can hide.
Then I see your handsome face
And we are in eachothers arms,
Feeling secure in our embrace,
Protected from all harm.
Then slowly the darkness fades away,
And light fills my quiet room.
What was night has turned into day.
My dream was over too soon.



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Heather C.

© Copyright 1999 HCwildchild - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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1 posted 1999-09-11 09:49 PM


Wow, beautiful piece, HCwildchild.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


Dark Angel
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2 posted 1999-09-11 10:06 PM


HC, loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



HCwildchild
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3 posted 1999-09-11 10:30 PM


Thanx guys (hugs)
Denise
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4 posted 1999-09-11 10:35 PM


Very lovely, Heather!

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Denise

WhtDove
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5 posted 1999-09-11 10:39 PM


Nice dream...wish I could dream one like that. Though my hubby would probably wake me up asking what was up. LOL Very Nice!!!
TrulY PreciouS
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6 posted 1999-09-11 10:52 PM


That is a nice poem! I actually had one of those dreams. It's a give a great feeling afterwards. =)

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TrulĀ„ PreciouĀ§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"




HCwildchild
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7 posted 1999-09-13 05:36 PM


Thanx

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Heather C.

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8 posted 2004-12-24 11:13 AM


enjoyed this
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9 posted 2004-12-24 07:23 PM


Great write!!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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