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The Dream That Ended Too Soon

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HCwildchild
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0 posted 09-11-99 09:24 PM       View Profile for HCwildchild   Email HCwildchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HCwildchild

Gradually dusk falls upon the land,
Engulfing the world in darkness.
No longer can you see the sun,
The midnight hour is upon us.
A cold wind sweeps down through the streets,
Whilst I lie awake in bed,
And I must pull tight the sheets,
And rest my weary head.
Then I slowly close my eyes,
And dream of you and me.
The stars soon cover the night sky,
They are the only light you can see.
And I am safe and warm inside,
When I'm dreaming of the things that could be.
Where there is nothing we can hide.
Then I see your handsome face
And we are in eachothers arms,
Feeling secure in our embrace,
Protected from all harm.
Then slowly the darkness fades away,
And light fills my quiet room.
What was night has turned into day.
My dream was over too soon.



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Heather C.
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Alwye
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1 posted 09-11-99 09:49 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, beautiful piece, HCwildchild.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Dark Angel
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2 posted 09-11-99 10:06 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

HC, loved it

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Samuel Coleridge


HCwildchild
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3 posted 09-11-99 10:30 PM       View Profile for HCwildchild   Email HCwildchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HCwildchild

Thanx guys (hugs)
Denise
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4 posted 09-11-99 10:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Heather!

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Denise
WhtDove
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Nice dream...wish I could dream one like that. Though my hubby would probably wake me up asking what was up. LOL Very Nice!!!
TrulY PreciouS
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6 posted 09-11-99 10:52 PM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

That is a nice poem! I actually had one of those dreams. It's a give a great feeling afterwards. =)

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TrulĄ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"



HCwildchild
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7 posted 09-13-99 05:36 PM       View Profile for HCwildchild   Email HCwildchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HCwildchild

Thanx

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Heather C.
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enjoyed this
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Great write!!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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