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Me Loves Him (a little humor)

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DBeth
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0 posted 09-11-99 08:44 PM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for DBeth


Me loves him as if him were dirt.Me did not know him were a flirt.Oh,gosh!Oh,gee!How me loves he, and he loves she and she aint me.Darn! Me hate him, wish him die.Said him love me but him lie.Love is love and always was,Me get him back me always does! (No special meaning,Just thought it was cute.)

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Lucie
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1 posted 09-11-99 09:02 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

DBeth.. we love your poetry.. don't take this the wrong way ok?

Me loves him as if him were dirt.(return key)
Me did not know him were a flirt. (return key)
Oh,gosh!Oh,gee!How me loves he, (return key)
and he loves she and she aint me. (return key)
Darn! Me hate him, wish him die. (return key)
Said him love me but him lie. (return key)
Love is love and always was, (return key)
Me get him back me always does (return key)

When typing your poem into the little "POST NEW TOPIC BOX" if you hit the enter/return key after each line of poetry, it makes it so much easier to read. And softens the blow to those of us poets who are anal retentive about structure.. Just a suggestion.. hehe

oh.. and by the way.. I love this.. too cute.


[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 09-11-99).]
DBeth
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2 posted 09-11-99 09:15 PM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Thanks, I didn't know what I was doing wrong.Thanks again for the tip.
he,he,he,he,he
DBeth

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Denise
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3 posted 09-11-99 10:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Cute!

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Denise
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4 posted 09-11-99 10:34 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I had to laugh at this. This was really cute, and humerous!
U K Hero
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5 posted 09-12-99 09:41 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

You made me :-)
Justbleu
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6 posted 09-15-99 06:10 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Gosh...Me loved it!!

Tank U!!

Justbleu

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Elizabeth
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7 posted 09-15-99 06:32 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Me loves it too! But not as if it was dirt.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 09-15-99 07:09 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DBeth,
Well you got me to, I mean too, I mean two.
Oh hell it was a great poem.
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