»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #2
»
The endless poem
| Open Poetry #2 |
|
The endless poem |
|
|
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
|
The shoes chase other prints The cars chase other cars The clouds chase the winds Which lead them to the stars The wind chases a kite The train chases a rail The day chases the night The dog chases its tail A kid chases his mother The start chases the end Clocks hands chase one another And all begins again The shoes chase other prints... ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
||
| © Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...and on and on and on! Very nice Master! I enjoyed this!  ------------------ Denise |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was neat! Well done, etc, etc, etc... |
||
|
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks, thanks thanks thanks thanks... ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
||
|
Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
That was cool!! I enjoyed that a lot!!  Nice job as always!! Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
||
|
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank for your comments and I appreciatte the pic. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||