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The Ocean Breeze

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Tisha
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Somehow a sense of fear overwhelms me, yet thoughts of you remind me quickly of peace and love

The sand is hot beneath my feet - swiftly I reach the water; it cools me

The commanding waves thrash against my body and impulse of defeat consumes me

My thoughts reach quickly for you - your strength reages through my soul and again I am comforted by peace

A peace I can only imagine and long for

A peace which this commanding sense can't bring

A peace with which the sunset will set a blaze

A peace again cooled by a gentle breeze and that gentle breeze again reminds me of you...
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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 09-11-99 10:42 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I love the ocean so I had to read this! Very nice - I like the feeling especially in the first 2 lines....very good description! I felt I was there !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


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nice
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Yup, Very good write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

 
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