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Duet for Dieu

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caroline
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Look at love lowered
into my heartbeat as
music composed before
pink light from dawn
Gift by night revealed
joy comes in sunlight
Life songs you sing ~
music named within
wished peace
I accept with grateful honor
Wings borrowed from
freedom fly in
returned light so that
we always share our
sweet song as one

caroline 1999
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~~~Kisses to Dieu for his gift of friendship~~~

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-11-99 01:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Caroline. I enjoyed this!

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Denise
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2 posted 09-11-99 04:53 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Thanks Denise! He is a good friend, very very dear to my heart. I wish I could translate this to his native language as a surprise for him...but it is not easy to do..the words don't have the same meanings. Good thing he's bilingual!

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hoot_owl_rn
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Nicely written Caroline!
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4 posted 09-11-99 09:42 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

He is a lucky man to be a friend of yours, Caroline.
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Very unusual! I like this one a lot!
caroline
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My humble thanks...praise coming from such talented poets as all of you means much to me.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
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This is stunning. An unusual combination of images that flows like water - I like!
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love this!
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9 posted 12-24-2004 07:13 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Wonderful write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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