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Too much pain

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Sherri_baby
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0 posted 09-11-99 11:54 AM       View Profile for Sherri_baby   Email Sherri_baby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sherri_baby

Last night I tryed to take my life
I lost my blade so I found a knife
I saw on tv that once u did u'd die
I just failed something else and started to cry
Only a little blood came out of my vein
I wanted it to be a lot so I could end this pain
I got mad again and took some pills
I figured I had taken enough to kill
When I woke up in the morning I was dissapointed more
It was like I wanted to go to hell but I couldn't find the door
Maybe yesterday wasn't meant to be the end for me
Maybe, just maybe, it wasn't meant to be.
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Denise
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1 posted 09-11-99 01:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very tragic piece, well written. (hope it's not autobiographical)

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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 09-11-99 05:53 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tragic, very tragic....there are much better ways to deal with things than this way. If this is based on a true experience Sherri, please e-mail me. I'd like to at least be there for a sounding board. I've been through a great deal in my life, maybe I could help.
Hugs
Ruth

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 09-11-99 05:57 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Sherri

I ditto hoot..if this is about you, then feel free to email or talk to me as well...sometimes you have to go through it to understand it..

Big hugs sweetheart

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Tara Simms
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4 posted 09-11-99 06:04 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

The only way OUT of the pain, is to work your way THROUGH it. Keep writing, it's great therapy!
WhtDove
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5 posted 09-11-99 10:47 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I agree with all the above!!!!!! Channel into your writing and know that you can email any of us at anytime to talk. I think any one of us would be there for you happily!
Justbleu
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6 posted 09-16-99 07:46 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Everything they have said above is true...we are all here for you if you need to talk!! Writing is very good therepy...so keep it up!! I want to read more from you!!

Welcome!!

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MissQ
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7 posted 09-16-99 11:43 AM       View Profile for MissQ   Email MissQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MissQ

As I read this it broke my heart as it reminded me of a dark time in my past...it also cemented the fact that life is good and inner strength is always more than you think it is...
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