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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-09-11 05:42 AM


I've been thinking about online romance.
More often I've been dwelling on true love.
Loveplay has become an intricate dance.
Needing and wanting is all I'm sure of.

Any relationship's keystone is trust.
The start of trust is communication.
Cyber-sex does little to relieve lust.
Such is the gist of my rumination.

Problematic love is not mine alone.
Conversation online builds awareness.
Miscommunication I can't condone.
Cogitation reveals the unfairness.

My hope is that few can commiserate.
Legion numbers the multitudes that do.
Lovers' betrayal will eviscerate.
Jealousy's doubt interfered hitherto.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©



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caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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1 posted 1999-09-11 09:13 AM


A fascinating read. Communication is the key to all doors...

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

2 posted 1999-09-11 10:40 AM


Well said.Trust is hard to find on the net,but even harder in life.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
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Franklin, TN
3 posted 1999-09-11 05:34 PM


(hey,, I don't have a dictionary..).. (smile) lots of big words.. im' confused..
but i liked it..

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
4 posted 1999-09-11 07:08 PM


Well done Dream! Trust is the corner stone. You can't hardly tell online!
U K Hero
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since 1999-08-08
Posts 266
England
5 posted 1999-09-11 07:55 PM


Can I say ... I know where you are coming from, for I am A cyber slave.. good words Dreamevil.
~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
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Billings, MT USA
6 posted 1999-09-11 09:41 PM


Trust is definitely most important whether you are online or not, I believe. Great poem, Dream, as usual!

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
7 posted 1999-09-16 07:11 AM


I have learned the hard way that trust is sooo very important no matter what!!! Sometimes more so than love itself!!

Nice as always!!!



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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


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