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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-11-99 05:42 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I've been thinking about online romance.
More often I've been dwelling on true love.
Loveplay has become an intricate dance.
Needing and wanting is all I'm sure of.

Any relationship's keystone is trust.
The start of trust is communication.
Cyber-sex does little to relieve lust.
Such is the gist of my rumination.

Problematic love is not mine alone.
Conversation online builds awareness.
Miscommunication I can't condone.
Cogitation reveals the unfairness.

My hope is that few can commiserate.
Legion numbers the multitudes that do.
Lovers' betrayal will eviscerate.
Jealousy's doubt interfered hitherto.


©1999 DreamEvil



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caroline
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1 posted 09-11-99 09:13 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

A fascinating read. Communication is the key to all doors...

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Dragoness
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2 posted 09-11-99 10:40 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well said.Trust is hard to find on the net,but even harder in life.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
redwriter1
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3 posted 09-11-99 05:34 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

(hey,, I don't have a dictionary..).. (smile) lots of big words.. im' confused..
but i liked it..
WhtDove
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4 posted 09-11-99 07:08 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well done Dream! Trust is the corner stone. You can't hardly tell online!
U K Hero
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5 posted 09-11-99 07:55 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Can I say ... I know where you are coming from, for I am A cyber slave.. good words Dreamevil.
~one voice~
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6 posted 09-11-99 09:41 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Trust is definitely most important whether you are online or not, I believe. Great poem, Dream, as usual!

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"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

Justbleu
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7 posted 09-16-99 07:11 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I have learned the hard way that trust is sooo very important no matter what!!! Sometimes more so than love itself!!

Nice as always!!!



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Justbleu

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