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Living In Oblivion

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TrulY PreciouS
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0 posted 09-11-99 12:32 AM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

Look at me and tell me what you see

Does it take that long to tell me things about me

Do I not exist?

Do I have to show my name to you on a list?

You always ignore the things I do for you

You are hurting me inside, but I guess you have no clue

I wish you knew what I¹m feeling right now

I hope that there¹s a chance for us to be closer somehow

All I want from you is your trust and love

Do I have to wait until the heavenly clouds fall down from above?

Though I do believe that things are worth waiting for

Should I wait for you even if you do not care for me anymore?

You never noticed me crying with tears of sorrow

Already knowing you ask for forgiveness until tomorrow

Shame on me for asking for your helping hand

Shame on me for thinking you could understand

You shut me out of your life which is not fair

All you needed to show me is your love and care



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Trul„ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"



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LiLDiZzY
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1 posted 09-11-99 12:36 AM       View Profile for LiLDiZzY   Email LiLDiZzY   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for LiLDiZzY

another masterpiece from truly precious!
bravo!

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what if I, keep holding on...just maybe you'll see, that I do need you...

I know you probably will never love me too, but from the second I wake up I will never stop thinking about you...
TrulY PreciouS
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2 posted 09-11-99 12:54 AM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

thank you lildizzy!! I just love your compliments. hehe =)

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Trul„ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"



TrulY PreciouS
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3 posted 09-11-99 01:06 AM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

thank you lildizzy!! I just love your compliments. hehe =)

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Trul„ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"



Denise
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4 posted 09-11-99 01:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done, TrulY, I enjoyed this! So full of emotion !

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Denise
TrulY PreciouS
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5 posted 09-11-99 08:48 PM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

Thank you very much snyder! I am very glad you enjoyed this poem. My friend's life was the reason why i wrote this poem. =)

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Trul„ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"



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