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TrulY PreciouS
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since 1999-09-06
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0 posted 1999-09-11 12:32 PM


Look at me and tell me what you see

Does it take that long to tell me things about me

Do I not exist?

Do I have to show my name to you on a list?

You always ignore the things I do for you

You are hurting me inside, but I guess you have no clue

I wish you knew what I¹m feeling right now

I hope that there¹s a chance for us to be closer somehow

All I want from you is your trust and love

Do I have to wait until the heavenly clouds fall down from above?

Though I do believe that things are worth waiting for

Should I wait for you even if you do not care for me anymore?

You never noticed me crying with tears of sorrow

Already knowing you ask for forgiveness until tomorrow

Shame on me for asking for your helping hand

Shame on me for thinking you could understand

You shut me out of your life which is not fair

All you needed to show me is your love and care



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Trul¥ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"




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LiLDiZzY
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6
CA, USA
1 posted 1999-09-11 12:36 PM


another masterpiece from truly precious!
bravo!

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what if I, keep holding on...just maybe you'll see, that I do need you...

I know you probably will never love me too, but from the second I wake up I will never stop thinking about you...

TrulY PreciouS
Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20

2 posted 1999-09-11 12:54 PM


thank you lildizzy!! I just love your compliments. hehe =)

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Trul¥ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"




TrulY PreciouS
Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20

3 posted 1999-09-11 01:06 AM


thank you lildizzy!! I just love your compliments. hehe =)

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Trul¥ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"




Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-09-11 01:51 PM


Very well done, TrulY, I enjoyed this! So full of emotion !

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Denise

TrulY PreciouS
Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20

5 posted 1999-09-11 08:48 PM


Thank you very much snyder! I am very glad you enjoyed this poem. My friend's life was the reason why i wrote this poem. =)

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Trul¥ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"




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