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Just close your eyes...

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Master
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0 posted 09-10-99 10:50 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Just close you eyes
Our sight is limited in measure
Get closer than skin
And look for true pleasure
Above the clouds
Upon the moonlight street
Not only hands
But dreams will meet
Our minds will touch
And lose control
Through time and space
Our souls will whirl
Into the silence of the night
And rocking in a lazy motion
The river of our love
Will find an endless ocean
And there
Entangled in the summer heat
Not only hands
But dreams will meet
Just close your eyes...



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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-10-99 10:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is absolutely beautiful, Master. But that is no surprise!

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Denise
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2 posted 09-10-99 11:03 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I like your line "The river of our love
Will find an endless ocean"

Beautiful!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Pepper
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3 posted 09-10-99 11:04 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

yes...very beautiful indeed.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Master
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4 posted 09-10-99 11:47 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

*Blushing* Thanks everyone!

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I fell in love and kept on falling
Tara Simms
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5 posted 09-10-99 11:47 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

I'm becoming a big fan of yours!
Master
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6 posted 09-11-99 12:05 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I have that effect on smart people *S*

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I fell in love and kept on falling
WhtDove
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7 posted 09-11-99 12:23 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

You are gifted! Very touching piece you've written. I enjoyed it...gotta go, got my eyes closed..
Master
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8 posted 09-11-99 12:40 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks, looking forward to meeting you in my dream, closing my eyes...
tulip
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Master,
I'm impressed!
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 09-11-99 06:00 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow..........now where are those sleeping pills, wait for me, I'll find them here in a minute. Oh, there they are, yes, okay, should be there shortly...LOL
Okay, seriously, this was a beautiful and touching piece. I loved these lines
"Not only hands
But dreams will meet
Our minds will touch
And lose control"
The meeting of the minds, the meld between that which is real and that which is not...wow, what a way to express it. Wonderfully done!!



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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Master
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Thanks hoot and I'll see you in my dreams.
Isis
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12 posted 09-11-99 07:27 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Absolutely beautiful, passionate and well written. I wish my hubby could speak or write like that...:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 09-11-99 08:04 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh my, did someone forget to turn on the air conditioning in here

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin
RainbowGirl
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14 posted 09-11-99 08:08 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I think the sandman just intercepted my dreams...*g*

Hugs

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Master
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15 posted 09-11-99 09:29 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

wow, thanks you guys!
Justbleu
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16 posted 09-14-99 10:40 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Wait for me....just getting my teddy bear!!

Very nice!!!!


Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
Master
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17 posted 09-14-99 11:12 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Join in, hurry, I'm getting sleepy....
Severn
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18 posted 09-14-99 11:20 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Love the cyclic-ness of it! Sometimes it's hard to wake from dreams, isn't it.
Master
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19 posted 09-15-99 06:42 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I know it was hard this morning! Thank Severn
passing shadows
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20 posted 04-23-2004 01:56 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

so romantic!
Artic Wind
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21 posted 11-11-2007 12:36 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

romantic indeed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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