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Sundance
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0 posted 09-10-99 09:37 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sundance

I'll never ever be,
a person who can do poetry.
Although I do it under a tree,
the thought of me and poetry,
is so unlike anything of me,
but wait and you'll just see.
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Sundance
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1 posted 09-10-99 09:44 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

This is a poem that came off the top of my hea and I don't have time to revise it, so suggestions are good!


Denise
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2 posted 09-11-99 02:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sundance, this is cute. It has great potential. When you have some time, I'd love to see what you can make of this!

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3 posted 09-12-99 09:26 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

thanks,but right now I'm working on some other stuff,so I will later!

Justbleu
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4 posted 09-16-99 07:38 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I agree...I will wait patiently and see!!
I like what you have here....
I hope to read more from you!!!


Thank You

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