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Open Poetry #2
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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A
0 posted 1999-09-10 08:59 PM

can you start to fear me
when my candle starts to fade
can you start to see me
when im burning baby
will i still make the same sound
as you light the match
and im soaked in gasoline
but you'll never hear my scream..
because our love was
never what it seemed





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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-09-11 10:39 PM

All I can say is "WOW".....your poetry seems to have alot of feeling ! Very intense ! So much power in so few words....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale
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