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Faded Fire

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-10-99 08:59 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

can you start to fear me
when my candle starts to fade
can you start to see me
when im burning baby
will i still make the same sound
as you light the match
and im soaked in gasoline
but you'll never hear my scream..
because our love was
never what it seemed





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poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
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1 posted 09-11-99 10:39 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

All I can say is "WOW".....your poetry seems to have alot of feeling ! Very intense ! So much power in so few words....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


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