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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-10-99 06:30 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i could almost run
i could almost hide
if only i found
the courage buried deep inside
but i lack it
i lack it all
im your fall guy
sucker to the end
the user's best friend
but just see if you
can catch me in the end
when i self implode
in the sky
i wont lie
i wasnt meant to be
living in self pity



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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 09-11-99 10:37 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Very emotional piece - I like how you used lower case "i" for yourself....I did that once in a poem where I was feeling "small & helpless".....it tends to make the author seem that way.....great job !!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


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