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Emmy
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since 1999-06-29
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0 posted 1999-09-10 05:03 PM



Upon fragile, silent wings it flies
Floating along a soft wind's sigh
A shadow of beauty against the sky
Wings flitting quickly in the blink of an eye
And then, it's gone; a fleeting passerby
A portrait of grace, the butterfly

© Copyright 1999 Emmy - All Rights Reserved
jfreak
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since 1999-06-17
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1 posted 1999-09-10 05:15 PM


It is believed that in theory the fluttering of a butterflies wings affect the wind patterns of the hemisphere opposite of the one it is located in. Truly a beautiful poem about a butterfly. You did an exceptional job on this one. Keep up the great work.

Jfreak

Emmy
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since 1999-06-29
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KY
2 posted 1999-09-10 06:20 PM


Wow, that was a cool little factiod there! Makes you wonder... Thanks for your comment, JFreak!
Denise
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3 posted 1999-09-10 07:54 PM


Emmy, this is absolutely beautiful! I love it!

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Denise

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11
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4 posted 1999-09-10 09:34 PM


Very nice! That's all I can state right now cause I'm so depressed.


Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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5 posted 1999-09-10 10:38 PM


delightful,Emmy

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

WhtDove
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6 posted 1999-09-11 12:52 PM


Short, but pretty and delicate! very nice.
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