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jfreak
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0 posted 09-10-99 04:52 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jfreak

I long to look into
those diamond dusted eyes
And search for a heart
Which within I long to spy
And see your diamond dusted self
who seems so much more beauteous
than any time before
Yet, before you were no less
You speak with angelic prose
You weep diamond dusted tears
You reap supernatural riches
You overcome diamond dusted fears
I am reminded of a time
when you were oh so very mine
A precious diamond in the rough
Yet, now you are covered in a diamond dust

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WhtDove
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1 posted 09-10-99 05:37 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Jfreak, this was really good! I have a question that's been naggin me bout your name. I know a band named DC Talk, Jesus Freak album. Anything to do with that??
Julie
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2 posted 09-10-99 05:37 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Beautifully written. I especially liked
the last lines.

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Julie
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.
Marianne Williamson
jfreak
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3 posted 09-10-99 05:44 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

WhtDov, That is one of my all time fav albums. I am huge into Christian music. I have over 200 cds all Christian. I have almost the whole collection of DCtalk with exception to their first two albums. So yes it has something to do with that album. I just think that album was a pivotal point in Christianity in America when it came out. I think it totally challenged young people to be Jesus Freaks. Ever since then it has been with me. My computer name is Jfreak, my nickname is Moses, my real name is Brandon. All are powerful names and I will answer to them all. JESUS IS MY LORD AND KING AND I AM A FREAK FO HIM. I AM A FREAK 4 LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Julie,

thanx for the comment. I wrote this for my exgirlfriend who has become a very dear friend. She was my diamond in the rough and I still love her very dearly, not romantically but personnally. We talked today for the first time since June and she just inspired me to write. She always has.

Jfreak
WhtDove
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4 posted 09-10-99 06:41 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well Brandon, I am really glad to hear that you live for JESUS!! The only way to live! I listen to that CD too! Many favorites, among them Rich Mullins, God rest his soul! We will have to talk sometime. Can't say I have that many CD's but am working on it.
I read Josh 1:8. Thank you! God Bless ya buddy!!!!
jfreak
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5 posted 09-10-99 07:11 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

God bless you to dove.

J
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Well written..

Dark Angel
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7 posted 09-10-99 07:42 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

JFreak, I loved it,very well written I too loved the last few lines

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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My computer is going wacky too! Sorry!------------------
Denise

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Denise
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Very well done, Brandon. It has a romantic quality and a friendship quality! I too especially liked the last two lines! And keep lifting Him up!

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Denise
 
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