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miriam
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0 posted 09-10-99 01:54 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for miriam

What's the point of treating me right
And loving me for years,
If at the end I live in fright
I can't control the tears?

I thought for years your love was true
You called it "from the heart",
I did whatever i could do
So that we wouldn't fall apart.

You said you were sorry
But what does that mean?
My heart didn't know no worries
Until you came to stay with me.

I know that you miss me,
And I won't lie...i do to.
Why can't you see that what you did
Broke my heart in two?

I wish you all goodness,
In everything you do.
Our love was such a bless,
But now I walk the path without you.



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Mona Lisa
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1 posted 09-10-99 02:36 PM       View Profile for Mona Lisa   Email Mona Lisa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mona Lisa

This rings so true. It begs the question, if love is so wonderful, then why does it hurt so much?

Nice work.
Crimson Rogue
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2 posted 09-10-99 03:18 PM       View Profile for Crimson Rogue   Email Crimson Rogue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crimson Rogue

Good poem, but I can't help but wonder if it's me that you're walking alone from. Well done.
Julie
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3 posted 09-10-99 05:08 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Miriam, I can relate to this poem. You
inspired me to write one in my own version.
I'll be posting it soon. Good Work.

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Julie
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.
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Dark Angel
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4 posted 09-10-99 08:19 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Miriam, this is a good poem, I loved it, I can relate to this. thanks for sharing

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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5 posted 09-10-99 10:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done Miriam. Sometimes love hurts, it's true. Sometimes, it's just not meant to be! You have captured the pain very well indeed!

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Denise
miriam
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6 posted 09-11-99 06:32 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

thank you all for reading and for the good comments.
Crimson...if you think this poem is for you then it's because in your heart you know what you've done to me. I personally believe that if your heart wouldn't feel so guilty, the thought of this poem being for you wouldn't even pass your mind. You decide if this poem is for you or not.

miriam
Justbleu
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7 posted 09-16-99 01:11 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I believe almost anyone can relate to this!!
I certainly can!! Nice writing!!

Thanks again...

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

passing shadows
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8 posted 04-23-2004 01:49 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

this aches
Artic Wind
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9 posted 11-11-2007 12:19 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

sad, but true

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