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Sunshine
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0 posted 1999-09-09 09:23 PM


Visions [an exercise to Caroline’s challenge]

Visions come to me in dreaming
dreaming whiles the time away
away on horses I shall ride far
far into the cloudy heights
heights which take me to my loving
loving man of mine
mine so warm, tender, handsome
handsome being a state of mind.
Mind now you, this way of dreaming,
dreaming could be your escape
escape to ‘what’ you may ask;
ask away, come what may
may your dreams always
be visions.

©KRJ
9 September, 1999


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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-09 09:32 PM


This is beautiful Sunshine. Very dreamy!
Pepper
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2 posted 1999-09-09 09:35 PM


Sunshine, very well written

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-09-09 09:38 PM


Sunshine...I absolutely love this piece!! The format is great..using the last word of every line as the first word for the following line...great!! You did a wonderful job here.
BRAVO!!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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4 posted 1999-09-10 08:23 AM


Go to Caroline's post in "Challenges" - this is where the format stemmed from! It is an interesting exercise, to say the least. Thanks for the comments!
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5 posted 1999-09-11 10:17 AM


Oh my...how did I ever miss THIS? It is wonderful, Sunshine! I should have known you would take the challenge and run with it
Back to the top with this one, my dear!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

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