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Wilting Acrostically

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Wilting Acrostically

Withering
Inclinations of
Love and
Times lost
In
Narcissus’
Garden

©KRJ
9 September, 1999


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Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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Excellent! But my whole way of reading poems has changed (thanks to Craig)...I have to read the letters down the left (and sometimes the right) to be sure I don't miss any hidden messages!
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Wow, you did an excellent job with this one. Very nicely done.

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Very innovative, Sunshine
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Well done acrostic!
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Thanks all - I'm s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-n-g!
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very good indeed.....

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I've been trying to work something acrostic, but have yet to be successful. You do not seem to have such problems. Very slick.
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See, this is what happens when you're talented, and write acrostics! At least she can spell huh?
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Ditto!

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Thanks, everyone. Christopher, as for my spelling...my imaginary teacher is always hovering overhead with her ruler in hand! I even sit up straight at the keyboard!
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