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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 1999-09-09 09:01 PM

Wilting Acrostically

Withering
Inclinations of
Love and
Times lost
In
Narcissus’
Garden

©KRJ
9 September, 1999

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-09-09 09:03 PM

Excellent! But my whole way of reading poems has changed (thanks to Craig)...I have to read the letters down the left (and sometimes the right) to be sure I don't miss any hidden messages!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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2 posted 1999-09-09 10:00 PM

Wow, you did an excellent job with this one. Very nicely done.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Balladeer

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3 posted 1999-09-09 10:08 PM

Very innovative, Sunshine

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

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Illinois

4 posted 1999-09-09 10:54 PM

Well done acrostic!

Sunshine

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5 posted 1999-09-10 08:19 AM

Thanks all - I'm s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-n-g!

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

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6 posted 1999-09-10 10:39 AM

very good indeed.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

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7 posted 1999-09-10 05:22 PM

I've been trying to work something acrostic, but have yet to be successful. You do not seem to have such problems. Very slick.

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

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Purgatorial Incarceration

8 posted 1999-09-10 11:23 PM

See, this is what happens when you're talented, and write acrostics! At least she can spell huh?

Denise

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9 posted 1999-09-10 11:45 PM

Ditto!

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Denise

Sunshine

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10 posted 1999-09-11 07:22 AM

Thanks, everyone. Christopher, as for my spelling...my imaginary teacher is always hovering overhead with her ruler in hand! I even sit up straight at the keyboard!

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