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beowulf_26
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 183


0 posted 1999-09-09 07:44 PM


Unrequited

How lovely lonely I feel in your arms.
My heart pausing, waiting.

You know I love you.

Why must I torture myself. Yearning for a trio of sounds that I may never be privy to.

Just three simple words.

Unrequited love sucks.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-09 09:07 PM


Oh, very nice indeed...so few words and the say so much. Isn't it funny how three simple words can change ones life??

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 1999-09-09 09:23 PM


Love is over-rated.

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
3 posted 1999-09-14 05:08 PM


This is absolutely beautiful...I echo when I say so much said in so few a words...outstanding, I've been there. I'll dust this off, and back it goes to the top!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



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