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stoney1
Junior Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 12
Wooster, Ohio, Wayne

0 posted 1999-09-09 07:39 PM


Here I am alone again
All by myself without a friend
From me to you I do confide
All these feelings I've locked inside

It hurt's so much I must admit
To be alone this does not fit
All this love I have to share
I'd give to you without a care

All my heart needs is you
Not just anyone will do
I need you there by my side
To lose those feelings that I hide

It's getting late I feel alone
No one to call upon the phone
Is there someone there for me
I need someone to love you see

I'm like a puppet on a shelf
Feeling sorry for myself
It's not my fault I'm all alone
It didn't work out I should have known

Here I am alone again
All by myself without a friend
From me to you I do confide
All these feelings I've locked inside

Here I am alone again
Here I am alone again


Copyright1999 Harold Amstutz

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Harold Amstutz

© Copyright 1999 stoney1 - All Rights Reserved
beowulf_26
Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183

1 posted 1999-09-09 07:57 PM


Very nice. I always have an affinity for poems that come full circle in thier form.
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
2 posted 1999-09-09 08:09 PM


What a sad place to find yourself...although I think we can all relate....I agree that a poem that comes full circle is so "complete"...great job!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-09-09 10:23 PM


Harold, your words are haunting and very touching.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Kitty**
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
4 posted 1999-09-09 10:48 PM


You just put my thoughts/feelings in your poem. Been there, done that. I can identify
with this. Sad reading, but it was written
from the heart, that makes it great!

moonmoon
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277
TX , USA
5 posted 1999-09-09 11:32 PM



Yes, sad indeed...But well said..

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