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To My Love

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stoney1
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since 09-09-99
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0 posted 09-09-99 06:18 PM       View Profile for stoney1   Email stoney1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stoney1

I lie in bed
But cannot sleep
try to control
The urge to weep
If it would be
That we should part
Forever you'll live
Within my heart
My love for you
Is stronger now
We'll be together
I know not how
I do know this
Our love is true
And in good time
They'll see it too
From feable mind's
Come hate and lies
But in our hearts
True love never dies

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Copyright1999 Harold Amstutz

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Denise
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1 posted 09-09-99 07:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice indeed! I enjoyed this one!

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Denise
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2 posted 09-09-99 08:22 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I like the short lines, and how they seem to "fall" down the page as you read it....very easy on the eyes.....I write like this from time to time....it's one of my favorite forms. It seems to keep the reader interested, because of it's briefness....great job again !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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Harold...very poignant piece. It is well crafted. Welcome to the group....I am looking for much more.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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