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DBeth
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0 posted 1999-09-09 03:00 PM



My heart feels pain.What should I do?Is it a strain? What do I choose? ONE says go,the other to stay. Or should I worry about this on another day? Grin and go on like everything's fine.Pack up and leave everything behind.You won't ever talk to me, can I be that bad? Just open up ,or are you really that mad? We can work this out,just give us a try.Together forever with nothing to hide.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 1999-09-09 03:05 PM


DBeth, let me be one of the first to welcome you to Passions. Are you open for some well-intended comments?

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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