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The Rescue

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pjtavison
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0 posted 09-09-99 03:47 AM       View Profile for pjtavison   Email pjtavison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pjtavison

Where are you?
Cast about in this torrent.

I am adrift.
Without rudder without direction.

I see not.
Clouds of doubt surround me.

Cold, angry, lost.
No mercy in a merciless void.

I am succumbing.
An abyss of unknown fathoms.

Behold a star!
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INclan
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since 07-20-99
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1 posted 09-09-99 04:04 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Welcome to Passions. I like this one. I suspect everyone feels like this at some point in thier life. Thank you for posting...keep up the good work.

INclan
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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2 posted 09-09-99 09:45 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Doubt, how it seems to cloud our view! I can relate to this! Well done! WELCOME!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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3 posted 09-09-99 10:23 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow....I liked, I liked!! Very nicely done...I like the way your entire perspective (as well as your readers) changed with just two words...wonderfully done. Welcome...I will be looking for more indeed.

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