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tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


0 posted 09-09-99 03:40 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Friend is forever....

A Ray of sunshine came my way
And took the dark of yesterday
Far away from mind and thought
Was love and laughter that he taught
I had never dreamed until this day
Dreams had always slipped away
The thrill of dreaming while awake
Sometimes proved more than I could take
The smiles he put on my face
The laughter that we made
We lived together in one space
I am you and you am I
Forever always may this last
To have an hold till silence past
We know each other inside out
Never questioned, there is no doubt
Through miles and madness we held stead fast
Was nothing that cold keep us back
We spent the night, with sunrise in our eyes
And told of childhood games and cry's
Of life and loosing, bitter pasts
Of loving, longing holding fast
Oh never have I felt secure
As when wrapped in arms of love, so pure
In trusted love he gave so free
He gave, this love, his love, to me.


tori 99

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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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INclan
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since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
Indiana, USA


1 posted 09-09-99 04:52 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Nicely done Tori! Well written and well thought out. It flows very nicely. Yes, I like it a lot...in fact I must send it to a friend. Thanx loads for publishing this. Keep up the good work.

INclan

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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


2 posted 09-09-99 08:26 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Ah Tori, it is so nice to see you posting again! You have touched me! This was great! I just love to read your work!
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
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Tamarac Fla


3 posted 09-09-99 08:35 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Tori,
Enjoyed the read, well done.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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Very nicely done....this flowed smoothly and made for an enjoyable read

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
tori
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5 posted 09-09-99 04:43 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks guy's for all the kind words..
Glad you liked it :-)
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