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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 09-09-99 01:03 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

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Twinkle bright my shining star,
Your angel misses you tonight...
How I wonder where you are -
My written lover, shining knight.

Would you hold me if you could -
Tonight within your arms so strong?
Erase my pain - you understood...
Is needing you so wrong...?

I meet your needs & you meet mine
With simple words of love -
Our warm embrace - - poetic rhyme...
A gift that's ours from up above!

We'll meet tonight within my dreams...
I need to hear your voice -
We'll walk along our crystal streams
Our journey - quite by choice.........
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I wish I may - I wish I might
Have the wish - I wish tonight....
You.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 09-09-99 01:08 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

No fancy words of praise...


simply lovely!
miriam
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2 posted 09-09-99 01:26 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

love you ! your friend miriam
Richard 33
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3 posted 09-09-99 01:29 AM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

very good very,very good i liked it very much
i was starting to think you dropped off the face of the earth.good poem. would you believe it i had to reregister, so now i am
just plain Richard 33. i am back on line,
although i didn't get the chance to post yet.
keep in touch.
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 09-09-99 01:48 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ah, I feel so proud! Your very first post was to me! So you're NEW again....he he he Talk about ME falling off the face of the earth ! HA Nice to have you back! Enjoy the new forum, as you can see, there have been many changes! Lots of new people especially! I'm still trying to "learn" everybody! whew....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


moonmoon
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5 posted 09-09-99 01:58 AM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonmoon


A simple romantic song..well written indeed
Sue
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6 posted 09-09-99 02:47 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Simple and beautiful.
caroline
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7 posted 09-09-99 05:04 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

so lovely PFF....like a little dream

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
WhtDove
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8 posted 09-09-99 08:30 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was lovely indeed pFF!
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 09-09-99 10:28 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Now that's my type of nursery rhyme!!
Really, this was quite good, thanks for posting.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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10 posted 09-09-99 11:39 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful... wistful and whimsical!
Pepper
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Pff,....I to really enjoed this piece and agree with all above....very lovely indeed.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Lucie
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12 posted 09-09-99 12:23 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Oh! I can do better then that!



Twinkle, twinkle little star,
I want a brand new luxury car.
Out in the driveway by the street
with cd changer and leather seats.

hahhaa.. ok..so yours was better.

[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 09-09-99).]
miriam
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13 posted 09-09-99 12:27 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

Lucie.....i wonder about you sometimes...are you feeling okay today?
Lucie
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14 posted 09-09-99 12:40 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Oh I'm ok.. I have my happy pills.. 2 exedrin and a glass of grape coolaid..hehehe
LngJhnAg
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15 posted 09-09-99 01:34 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Femme - this was so poignant - I could almost feel your need and loneliness. Beautiful. You touch a chord in me with this poem.

Lucie - You are one witty, crazy dame, do you know that? lol. I love your riposte.
Iloveit
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16 posted 09-09-99 01:42 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well, this is a ditto of all of the above... can I do that??? lol, no really great poem, I know just how you feel
JennyLee
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17 posted 09-09-99 02:10 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

All I can say..."Simply Great!"

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Helewes
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18 posted 09-09-99 04:57 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Poet femme...at times you are the creme de la creme. Excellent poem.
tori
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19 posted 09-09-99 05:02 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Fatale....
you've done it again this was "beautiful".. it also touched a cord in my heart.. very good.. as alway's I might add,
:-)
Denise
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20 posted 09-09-99 07:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very Whimsical! I loved this!

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Denise
Andrew Scott
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21 posted 09-09-99 08:10 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Top Shelf material! Yes in deed! Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry and may your dreams slip into reality.
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


22 posted 09-10-99 01:43 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

poetFemmeFatale
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23 posted 09-10-99 01:56 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ah Chris - you're a man of many words! he he he

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


DreamEvil
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24 posted 09-10-99 05:08 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Quite touching.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvilŠ


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