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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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********************************************************** Twinkle bright my shining star, Your angel misses you tonight... How I wonder where you are - My written lover, shining knight. Would you hold me if you could - Tonight within your arms so strong? Erase my pain - you understood... Is needing you so wrong...? I meet your needs & you meet mine With simple words of love - Our warm embrace - - poetic rhyme... A gift that's ours from up above! We'll meet tonight within my dreams... I need to hear your voice - We'll walk along our crystal streams Our journey - quite by choice......... ********************************************************** I wish I may - I wish I might Have the wish - I wish tonight.... You. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
No fancy words of praise... simply lovely! |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
love you  ! your friend miriam |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
very good very,very good i liked it very much i was starting to think you dropped off the face of the earth.good poem. would you believe it i had to reregister, so now i am just plain Richard 33. i am back on line, although i didn't get the chance to post yet. keep in touch. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ah, I feel so proud! Your very first post was to me! So you're NEW again....he he he Talk about ME falling off the face of the earth ! HA Nice to have you back! Enjoy the new forum, as you can see, there have been many changes! Lots of new people especially! I'm still trying to "learn" everybody! whew.... ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
A simple romantic song..well written indeed |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Simple and beautiful. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
so lovely PFF....like a little dream ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was lovely indeed pFF! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Now that's my type of nursery rhyme!! Really, this was quite good, thanks for posting. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful... wistful and whimsical! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Pff,....I to really enjoed this piece and agree with all above....very lovely indeed....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Oh! I can do better then that!  Twinkle, twinkle little star, I want a brand new luxury car. Out in the driveway by the street with cd changer and leather seats. hahhaa.. ok..so yours was better. [This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 09-09-99).] |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
Lucie.....i wonder about you sometimes...are you feeling okay today? |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Oh I'm ok.. I have my happy pills.. 2 exedrin and a glass of grape coolaid..hehehe |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Femme - this was so poignant - I could almost feel your need and loneliness. Beautiful. You touch a chord in me with this poem. Lucie - You are one witty, crazy dame, do you know that? lol. I love your riposte. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well, this is a ditto of all of the above... can I do that??? lol, no really great poem, |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
All I can say..."Simply Great!" ------------------ Helewes |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Poet femme...at times you are the creme de la creme. Excellent poem. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Fatale.... you've done it again this was "beautiful".. it also touched a cord in my heart.. very good.. as alway's I might add, :-) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very Whimsical! I loved this! ------------------ Denise |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Top Shelf material! Yes in deed! Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry and may your dreams slip into reality. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ah Chris - you're a man of many words! he he he ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Quite touching. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful, as always, my sweet. I see you have left Chris speechless. Can't blame him, either. Tell ya what, close your eyes, hold on tight, and I will share with you a dream tonight. Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh please do...I'll be waiting for you...hurry. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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