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Sunshine
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0 posted 09-08-99 10:28 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

W.W.W.W.W. & H.

Wings whispering
Haunting melodies
Oh hear the Angels sing

Wondrous Angels
Hovering over
Angels taking
Troubles over

Worries of the
Heart
Enlightened in the
Night

When you allow
Heavens’ hosts
E’re come in your heart,
Really come in
Ethereal beings all

Worries to
Hasten away
Yes

and (because)

Heaven knows
Only
Wondrous things

©KRJ
8 September, 1999


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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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I love it, Sunshine..... Your poetry is always uplifting....
Seymour Tabin
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Sunshine,
Agree with Nan, I've tried that style it's not easy. Very good.
If I don't write for a while it's because I'm changing computers and down loading all the stuff on my old hard drive will be a pain. But never fear I'll be here. *L*
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Sunshine, this was great!
passing shadows
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perplexed by the title...amazed by the poem!
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great title, great use of it. You must an angel.

Shadowy One - How are you?

Seymour - In the future, I'd rather not hear about you NEW computer - I hate this sickly shade of envy green. lol - good luck on the file transfers.
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Great poem, Sunshine!
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Thanks everyone. Believe it or not, wasn't one of the easier pieces I've ever done!
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It shows great innovation and imagination and that's what good writing is all about.
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Gee 'Deer, "great innovation and imagination..."

must mean I've got dull beat, at least for a while! Thanks!

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