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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 1999-09-08 10:28 PM

W.W.W.W.W. & H.

Wings whispering
Haunting melodies
Oh hear the Angels sing

Wondrous Angels
Hovering over
Angels taking
Troubles over

Worries of the
Heart
Enlightened in the
Night

When you allow
Heavens’ hosts
E’re come in your heart,
Really come in
Ethereal beings all

Worries to
Hasten away
Yes

and (because)

Heaven knows
Only
Wondrous things

©KRJ
8 September, 1999

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 1999-09-09 06:14 AM

I love it, Sunshine..... Your poetry is always uplifting....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-09-09 08:28 AM

Sunshine,
Agree with Nan, I've tried that style it's not easy. Very good.
If I don't write for a while it's because I'm changing computers and down loading all the stuff on my old hard drive will be a pain. But never fear I'll be here. *L*

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

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Illinois

3 posted 1999-09-09 09:40 AM

Sunshine, this was great!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 1999-09-09 12:52 PM

perplexed by the title...amazed by the poem!

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 1999-09-09 12:57 PM

great title, great use of it. You must an angel.

Shadowy One - How are you?

Seymour - In the future, I'd rather not hear about you NEW computer - I hate this sickly shade of envy green. lol - good luck on the file transfers.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

6 posted 1999-09-09 01:00 PM

Great poem, Sunshine!

Sunshine

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7 posted 1999-09-09 03:21 PM

Thanks everyone. Believe it or not, wasn't one of the easier pieces I've ever done!

Balladeer

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8 posted 1999-09-09 04:05 PM

It shows great innovation and imagination and that's what good writing is all about.

Sunshine

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9 posted 1999-09-22 10:04 PM

Gee 'Deer, "great innovation and imagination..."

must mean I've got dull beat, at least for a while! Thanks!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-22-1999).]

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