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Feeling the pain of a good friend...this is for you...you know who you are.

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Starith
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0 posted 09-08-99 07:59 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Starith

I wrote this for a friend of mine who is going through a pretty rough time...I can only hope that they find their way. I just want to say that I always stand beside you, you know who you are.

I stare at you through misted eyes,
As I lay here in this bed of lies.

A love so rare,
A dream I thought you shared.

And now I realize,
You've handed me your pack of lies.

The white dove tainted,
As darkness across the sky is painted.

You always thought I was sappy,
So I guess now you're happy.

Look at what you've done to me,
Why bother - you can't see.

All the pain that you've in lain,
The gallent dragon has been slain.

But I am strong,
And so I'll go on - I'll live long.

As for you, you just wait,
I know what lies in your fate!

A curse on thee,
The same pain you've caused to me.

You are not as strong I think,
Therefore in that storm your ship will sink.

And you'll drown in you sea of pain,
Knowing that I once felt the same.

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!

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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-08-99 08:05 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Starith

Wish your friend strength from me, I have more than I need and can pass some on....

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



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Skyfyre
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2 posted 09-08-99 08:30 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

I wish your friend strength ... you are obviously a willing shoulder to cry on ... there should be more friends like you in this world ...

Best of luck to both of you ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


moonmoon
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3 posted 09-09-99 12:38 AM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonmoon


I hope your friend knows what a great gift of friendship he/she has in you.
Well written.

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


Starith
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4 posted 09-09-99 05:29 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Thank you all.

Rainbow: Thank you...my friend and I appreciate it very much.

Nocht: Thank you also...I try to be the best friend I can be...no matter what.

Moon: I hope my friend realizes that also.

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!

passing shadows
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5 posted 12-24-2004 11:11 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautiful
*Alli4000*
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6 posted 12-24-2004 07:25 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

Fantastic write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

 
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