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wlksfarwmn
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since 1999-09-08
Posts 3
neah bay,wa

0 posted 1999-09-08 04:28 PM


my love for you is like
the sand on the beach
ever changing
ever lasting
my love for you rushes
over me like the ocean
on the sand
forever strong
and forever free
my love for you surrounds me
filling me with joy
and happiness
ever changing - ever lasting
forever strong
foever free
my love for you
rushes over me

[This message has been edited by wlksfarwmn (edited 09-09-99).]

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traveler
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since 1999-08-17
Posts 119

1 posted 1999-09-08 04:43 PM


I like this even better then your first ...smile... thanks for sharing a brighter view on the subject of love ...

[This message has been edited by traveler (edited 09-08-99).]

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