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wlksfarwmn
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since 1999-09-08
Posts 3
neah bay,wa

0 posted 1999-09-08 03:28 PM


my love for you
rushes through me
like a river
it fills my spirit with
beauty
makes my heart dance
you touched my life
like no other
a love so perfect
strong like the ocean
and soft as the summer wind
bright as the wishing star
and warm as the fire on the beach
together our journey can
be rich and complete
feel the magic
walk with me in the beauty

[This message has been edited by wlksfarwmn (edited 09-08-99).]

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Sue
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
1 posted 1999-09-08 03:31 PM


That is lovely - I can feel it with you. May you always feel that way.
traveler
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since 1999-08-17
Posts 119

2 posted 1999-09-08 03:33 PM


this was very nice ..."bright as the wishing star, and as warm as a fire on the beach" ... a beautiful image ... looking forward to your next posts ... welcome to the forums and thank you ...

[This message has been edited by traveler (edited 09-08-99).]

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-09-08 09:12 PM


Lovely! I'm glad you walked far enough to join us here!

Welcome to the family!


Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

4 posted 1999-09-15 08:38 PM


Gorgeous! It has to come back up.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-09-15 09:12 PM


Very lovely walks. Welcome to the group!!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-09-15 11:01 PM


This is truly lovely.

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Denise

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