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walk with me

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wlksfarwmn
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0 posted 09-08-99 03:28 PM       View Profile for wlksfarwmn   Email wlksfarwmn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wlksfarwmn

my love for you
rushes through me
like a river
it fills my spirit with
beauty
makes my heart dance
you touched my life
like no other
a love so perfect
strong like the ocean
and soft as the summer wind
bright as the wishing star
and warm as the fire on the beach
together our journey can
be rich and complete
feel the magic
walk with me in the beauty

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Sue
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1 posted 09-08-99 03:31 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

That is lovely - I can feel it with you. May you always feel that way.
traveler
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2 posted 09-08-99 03:33 PM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

this was very nice ..."bright as the wishing star, and as warm as a fire on the beach" ... a beautiful image ... looking forward to your next posts ... welcome to the forums and thank you ...

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Poet deVine
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3 posted 09-08-99 09:12 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely! I'm glad you walked far enough to join us here!

Welcome to the family!

Severn
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4 posted 09-15-99 08:38 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Gorgeous! It has to come back up.
hoot_owl_rn
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Very lovely walks. Welcome to the group!!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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6 posted 09-15-99 11:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is truly lovely.

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