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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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 `Tis quite a splendor for eyes to behold, Leaves that are changing from green into gold. The worlds' splashed with color o're our heads, With phenomenal yellows, crimpsons and reds. Leaves as they flutter down off of the tree, Soon fall to the ground splashing colors so free. As they blanket the earth and give beauty to streets, Too soon they will dry and crumble under our feet. The air will start changing, crisp winds will soon sway, And fall will then exit, as winter makes way. |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Fall has always been my favorite season ... you've captured why ...thank you, again ... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WhtDove, this is truly beautiful. I love Autumn/Fall as well,you've certainly captured it very well. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can feel the crisp wind coming. Thank you for a wonderful cache of leaves! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks to each of you! I don't know why, but it was on my mind since I stepped out the door this morning! I just had to write something about the beauty of fall! Thanks again! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fall is my favorite time of year also. And this is one of my favorites of your poems too!  ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks D! I just love the colors in the fall. I'm kind of tied between summer and fall. I love the leaves, but rather the warm weather. Thank You! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You have done an excellent job of portraying falls splendor in words. Fall just happens to be my favorite of all the seasons. Wonderful rhythym and rhyme in this piece Whtdove...you did well!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Opps...I posted twice by accident, but that gives me a chance to say the pallet on the top of your posting works well as you have truly painted a picture for us [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 09-09-99).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's still blazing hot here... but your words painted fall so vividly I can almost feel a cool breeze... Beautiful! |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
i have always disliked fall. I'm sure i'll see it different now since you painted such a nice picture of it for me. I could feel it creeping in already (fall i mean). |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well I am just flattered by all these compliments! Thank you so very much! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Nature paints herself to endear herself in the hearts of her children and she does it well. Your words have painted me a picture just as endearing as the reality they describe. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well Dream, that's quite the compliment! Thank you so much!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's that time again, yes beautiful write |
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