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WhtDove
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`Tis quite a splendor for eyes to behold,
Leaves that are changing from green into gold.
The worlds' splashed with color o're our heads,
With phenomenal yellows, crimpsons and reds.
Leaves as they flutter down off of the tree,
Soon fall to the ground splashing colors so free.
As they blanket the earth and give beauty to streets,
Too soon they will dry and crumble under our feet.
The air will start changing, crisp winds will soon sway,
And fall will then exit, as winter makes way.
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traveler
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1 posted 09-08-99 02:08 PM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

Fall has always been my favorite season ... you've captured why ...thank you, again ...
Dark Angel
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2 posted 09-08-99 05:20 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove, this is truly beautiful. I love Autumn/Fall as well,you've certainly captured it very well.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Sunshine
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3 posted 09-08-99 05:22 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I can feel the crisp wind coming. Thank you for a wonderful cache of leaves!

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Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


WhtDove
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4 posted 09-08-99 06:41 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks to each of you! I don't know why, but it was on my mind since I stepped out the door this morning! I just had to write something about the beauty of fall! Thanks again!
Denise
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5 posted 09-08-99 07:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Fall is my favorite time of year also. And this is one of my favorites of your poems too!

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Denise
WhtDove
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6 posted 09-08-99 10:57 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks D! I just love the colors in the fall. I'm kind of tied between summer and fall. I love the leaves, but rather the warm weather. Thank You!
hoot_owl_rn
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You have done an excellent job of portraying falls splendor in words. Fall just happens to be my favorite of all the seasons. Wonderful rhythym and rhyme in this piece Whtdove...you did well!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
hoot_owl_rn
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Opps...I posted twice by accident, but that gives me a chance to say the pallet on the top of your posting works well as you have truly painted a picture for us

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9 posted 09-09-99 11:34 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

It's still blazing hot here... but your words painted fall so vividly I can almost feel a cool breeze... Beautiful!
miriam
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10 posted 09-09-99 12:24 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

i have always disliked fall. I'm sure i'll see it different now since you painted such a nice picture of it for me. I could feel it creeping in already (fall i mean).
WhtDove
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11 posted 09-09-99 12:24 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well I am just flattered by all these compliments! Thank you so very much!
DreamEvil
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12 posted 09-12-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Nature paints herself to endear herself in the hearts of her children and she does it well. Your words have painted me a picture just as endearing as the reality they describe.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvilŠ


WhtDove
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13 posted 09-13-99 12:22 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well Dream, that's quite the compliment! Thank you so much!!
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it's that time again, yes

beautiful write
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