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A moment

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tori
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since 06-18-99
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


0 posted 09-08-99 10:01 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

The snow fall's all around us
Whiteness glows from the ground
There are mounds of snow beside the walk
And its still is falling down,
So we cling to each other
With arms wrapped around
Yet the coldness we don't feel,
For inside us burns a fire
Filled with true love passion
A yearning, a desire,
One moment is all it takes
For each of us to see
Wrapped in your arms
Is the place I long to be
Cold winds blow out of the north
Snow swirling in our face
Our breath blowing stem to the air
As we breathe fast and hard,
You hold my face so tenderly
And kiss my pleading lips
As two are one together
A moment I'll not forget

tori

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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.


[This message has been edited by tori (edited 09-08-99).]
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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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Illinois


1 posted 09-08-99 10:24 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Wow Tori, this was great! I have missed you posting, I'm glad you're back. Though I am not ready for those cold North winds yet...brr! Great Job!
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 09-08-99 10:26 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Tori, where have you been? Or am I the one who has been "lost?" Really nice poem here - you capture the moment well, I felt as if I were watching the exchange of romance here! My mind has been in another world for quite sometime, you'll have to excuse me if you've been here all along, and I've just failed to comment! I love your work, and was delighted to see you name "pop up" !!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


3 posted 09-08-99 03:02 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks WhtDove and Fatale!!
you have warmed my heart with your wonderful comments.. :-)
I'm not for the cold either WhtDove.. I'm a hot house plant..lol
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