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To love you completely

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Deb Lynne
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since 08-19-99
Posts 181
Where blue skies meet blue oce


0 posted 09-08-99 09:50 AM       View Profile for Deb Lynne   Email Deb Lynne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Deb Lynne

To love you completely
I'm not sure it could be
Too much is standing
Between you and me
I give you as much
As my heart will allow
To love you more
I'm not sure I know how
It would mean sacrificing
On someone else's part
I couldn't live with myself
For breaking their heart
I could not ask you
To let me be first
I'd rather leave and
Be the one to hurt worst
Caught between the two evils
Can make it seem wrong
But what I feel in my heart
Is too powerful and strong
Let me love you for now
If only for a small time
Let me know in my heart
That you'll always be mine
© Copyright 1999 Deb Lynne - All Rights Reserved
tori
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since 06-18-99
Posts 521
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


1 posted 09-08-99 09:57 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Deb this is beautiful and I think many poeple have been where this poem is coming from... you have written it so well..
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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


2 posted 09-08-99 10:44 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Yes indeed! I think a lot of people can relate to this one! I am surprised their aren't more comments than this. You wrote this very well!!! I enjoyed reading it!
LngJhnAg
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since 07-23-99
Posts 3654
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


3 posted 09-08-99 10:51 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

I can relate to this so well. Nicely done.
 
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