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loverbaby
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since 1999-09-07
Posts 15
Sioux City Iowa

0 posted 1999-09-08 12:02 PM


at night
looking beyond heavens light.
i feel your touch,
realize that i am in to much.
and i see your eyes,
which are the very heavens in diguise,
and i pause to say your name,
praying only that you feel the same
that you are wishin on the same star
and the heavens are only ours.
because only they know
that if i could only hold you i would never let you go.
how i long for your kiss
and the heavens know how you missed,
but someday
in someway
i will you tell you how i feel
\how this love is real
but for now i can only pray
that you feel the same way
and if you love me to
all you have to do
is look out at night
beyond the heavens light
and pause to hear if someone calls your name.


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Niki Frady

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-08 12:33 PM


Very lovely, loverbaby. I enjoyed this. Kind of romantic, but sad, yet hopeful too. Very nice.

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Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-09-08 11:13 AM


This was sweet thoughts, and sad, and hopeful like D states! I also enjoyed the read! Welcome!
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