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Shimmer New Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 5 |
I am unrestrained, undaunted by the height With golden hair With emerald eyes No perfect girl Can longer prevent my ascent toward light Wings climb over her flaxen hair Wings glide above her shimmering eyes Wings lift me to the pinnacle I soar to where I may shine |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very fanciful feel to this one. I like it! ------------------ Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Great word choice - creates impression of fantasy, as dsnyder said. Welcome, by the way!  |
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