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Shimmer
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0 posted 09-07-99 10:32 PM       View Profile for Shimmer   Email Shimmer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shimmer

I am unrestrained, undaunted by the height
With golden hair
With emerald eyes
No perfect girl
Can longer prevent my ascent toward light
Wings climb over her flaxen hair
Wings glide above her shimmering eyes
Wings lift me to the pinnacle
I soar to where I may shine
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1 posted 09-07-99 11:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very fanciful feel to this one. I like it!

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Great word choice - creates impression of fantasy, as dsnyder said. Welcome, by the way!
 
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