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Master
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0 posted 09-07-99 10:29 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Stolen away and there inspired
While seeing dreams during the day,
All saw me sleeping, so they say,
But no one said that I looked tired

Due to the fact that in the day
The dreams were floating in my sight
I cannot sleep; awake I stay
And like a lonesome shadow sway
Over my sleeping friends at night

Note: this is a translation of a poem by Tsvetaeva.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 09-08-99).]

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Denise
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1 posted 09-07-99 10:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks for sharing this! It's great!

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Denise
Master
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2 posted 09-07-99 11:58 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I'm glad you liked it Denise.
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3 posted 09-08-99 11:53 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Whew. So much more to learn...

Thanks for sharing!
Pepper
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I too enjoyed this Master...very thought provoking.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Master
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5 posted 09-08-99 05:14 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

There's always something to learn Sunshine, thank you for responding.

I'm glad you liked it Pepper.

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I fell in love and kept on falling
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Hmmm..Still pondering..Goon one Master..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 09-08-99 09:30 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I had to read it a couple of times to let it soak in, but I finally say....Wow! Very beautiful & moving !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


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8 posted 09-08-99 09:49 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Translating a poem is very dificult this was a good job.
Master
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9 posted 09-08-99 10:40 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks everybody. I wasn't sure about translating at first, it seemed too challenging. But it the end, translating turned out to be fun.
 
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