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The Keeper Of Keys
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0 posted 09-07-99 09:58 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

Shelter
~What you are to me is so much more than what words describe.
~A feeling that is so strong it can only be felt from deep inside.

~When the rain pours and the sky turns black,
~Will you take my hand?
~Run through the rain?
~Never look back?

~If the world came tumbling down, even the sun,
~Would you be there to shelter me?
~As I would you?
~Like a mother bird's wing for her young?

~A filthy world filled with greed and hate,
~Pushes us down.
~Alone we are strong,
~Together we fall no shorter than great.

~From the plentiful sufferings others are subdued,
~Pushed way down.
~How do they survive it?

~What everyone needs is a friend like you...



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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

© Copyright 1999 The Keeper Of Keys - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-07-99 10:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Keeper this is marvelous. I especially like the line 'Together we fall no shorter than great'. Fabulous!

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Denise
WhtDove
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2 posted 09-07-99 10:54 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Deep meaning, few words! Great Job!
The Keeper Of Keys
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3 posted 09-08-99 05:38 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

thanks a lot guys, that means a lot. I'm glad i FINALLY got some response on this forum, nobody ever replies, thank you so much, im glad you enjoyed.

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

moonmoon
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4 posted 09-08-99 09:31 PM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonmoon

Profound emotions, described in few words..Well done Keeper..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-08-99 09:46 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Keeper,
Enjoyed the read, good job.
The Keeper Of Keys
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6 posted 09-09-99 06:18 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

thanks everyone..seriously



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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

Justbleu
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7 posted 09-14-99 11:50 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

As always....I love your writing!! It touches my heart everytime!!! Thanks!!


Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
 
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