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BrightLight
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0 posted 09-07-99 05:58 PM       View Profile for BrightLight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrightLight

Our Happiness

You doused me in your champagne
hoping to extricate happiness
from deep within my exterior
smudged with sadness

You managed to intoxicate my imagination
and dance within my soul
You eased my happiness out from within
by caressing me with friendly conversation

You served me with your finest manners
chaperoned me to see your insights
You gathered my whole being into your world
where now our happiness is all that matters
© Copyright 1999 BrightLight - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Wow...very nicely done, I absolutely loved the way this was written

"You managed to intoxicate my imagination
and dance within my soul"

Excellent lines!!!


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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
BrightLight
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hoot_owl_rn, Thanks for your raving review.
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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I loved it, I like your choice of words! Intoxicate my imagination! Well done!
Pepper
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very beautfully written....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
 
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