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DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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0 posted 09-07-99 04:39 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Aimless,
Iíve wandered
lifeís myriad paths,
meandering
down every trail.
Iíve seen the sights
and heard the laughs.
All
that came before you
seems pale.


You
are the destination
towards which
all my travels lead,
the flame my imagination
and words
desperately need.
Your love
is the road
beneath my feet,
leading ever
to your heart.
Your passion
makes me complete
and has right
from the start.

Where my journey
does end
is also where
you and I begin,
forever and always
I will stay
by your side
and seek to win
your heart
with
the rhyme I spin
from
the gossamer fiber
of winding desire
until
the end of time.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©


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Iloveit
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1 posted 09-07-99 04:45 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

wow, just love the way you write, a very passionate man you are, in your likes and your dislikes....and very good at expressing your feelings so that the reader feels them too :-)
caroline
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2 posted 09-07-99 05:39 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

enchanting...

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 09-07-99 06:44 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice...you should write free verse more often

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Severn
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since 07-17-99
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4 posted 09-07-99 06:59 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Really, really nice DreamEvil.
Alicat
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since 05-23-99
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5 posted 09-07-99 07:05 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Very beautiful. I bet your wife loved you all the more for penning this in her honor and name. Well done, gallant sir.

Alicat

[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 09-07-99).]
WhtDove
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6 posted 09-07-99 08:24 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Dream this was beautiful! You certainly have a way with words! You certainly do have a passion and can clearly explain both sides!
Very well done, I loved it!!!
DreamEvil
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7 posted 09-07-99 09:02 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you much, 'tis a piece I did for a Lady near and dear to my heart. My wife received her verse privately.
Christopher
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8 posted 09-07-99 11:52 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Has anyone ever pointed out the contradiction that you are my friend? Truly breathing beauty with one breath, while the next exudes bitter hatred. I envy the yin-yang of your talent!
Crimson Rogue
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9 posted 09-08-99 03:24 PM       View Profile for Crimson Rogue   Email Crimson Rogue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crimson Rogue

I can't help but pondering how relevant this piece is to my persona. Well done.

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~A rose would not be worth the name without it's thorns~
~one voice~
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10 posted 09-08-99 07:47 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, I think this poem is absolutely beautiful! I love it! Thank you for posting it...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


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